Flagger
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| Checking aesthetics with a critical eye
I am getting ready to pull the trigger on a pretty big collateral order. This will be foil stamped on a 5X7 journal. I like the placement, but want to be sure everything else is in line and balanced. Ship, tagline, name, phone and URL.
This will also be reproduced but in larger form for some shopping totes (Green bags) for grocery/travel client gifts.
Thanks for your input.
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U B Funny | Looks good, Chuck. If the rest of the fill gets placed well, you have a winner.  |
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If I might suggest one thing... change your tag line font to your ID font. It's less confusing to stay with 2 styles i.e. your 'Cruise Holidays' font and visually cleaner. |
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Flagger
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| Thanks for the suggestion. The tagline font is stylized and part of the trademark. I can either drop it or keep it, but with visual standards I have to keep it as is.
I should probably try to get my name number and URL in either Garamond or Myraid fonts which are the two approved fonts according to their published visual standards.
Thanks for checking for balance and aesthetics. When you are spending a couple of thou on collateral, you don't want it to have some number for sex hotline or something worse. 
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