IhatemyISP
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Japan | reply to Dunga Bee
Re: Good Response
Nice, though it had several grammar issues. |
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entropy1
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join:2002-09-25 | Yes, nice, but the grammar issues did detract from it. It's somewhat disappointing to see that the person defending this issue can't even write well. ("...in a MANNER of minutes..."?)
Yikes. |
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W8ASA
Tieng gi vay?
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Dayton, OH
clubs:  | heh heh: What's the matter with manner? heh heh |
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Grail Knight
Who Dares Wins
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The perfect world of grammar we live in.
Perhaps you should recheck your post again for errors.
I see two without trying.  
It is refreshing to be able to read the legal response to Mr. Hopkins. I hope that in due course, the outcome proves advantageous to the Anti-Spyware Vendors and the users that rely on their information to keep their computers secure.
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ROCINANTE 2112
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CRUNCH THIS!
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Grail Knight
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| First error I see is the use of “It's”, there is no ownership in this instance so “It is” would be used.
Can't should be "cannot".
Silly grammar nitpicking yet it was pointed out for the Vendor's lawyer showing we all make mistakes.
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tapeloop
1959. I try to kick the ball. I miss.
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| said by Grail Knight  :First error I see is the use of “It's”, there is no ownership in this instance so “It is” would be used. Can't should be "cannot". Silly grammar nitpicking yet it was pointed out for the Vendor's lawyer showing we all make mistakes. Um...you do know that "it's" is a contraction of "it is" right? So the 2 can be used interchangeably.
»www.cgl.uwaterloo.ca/~csk/its.html
»www.stormloader.com/garyes/its/#top
»www.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/its.html
Use of "can't" is a preference. While grammatically correct, one should avoid the use of contractions in formal correspondence. I don't think internet message boards qualify. 
Appropriate that you would choose "it's" to nitpick, considering that you seem to be a Python fan.  |
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pc319
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I thought that the word "it's" is another way to say "It is". That is what the apostrophe is for.
I think the word you are thinking of is "its" signifies ownership.
edit: nevermind I see that tapeloop posted that before me |
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Grail Knight
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The Knights who say "Ni--!".
Of course my ref. to grammar was in jest to those that would pick others apart. Granted a lawyer should have proof read his work.
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tapeloop
1959. I try to kick the ball. I miss.
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| Heh. So by criticizing your post satirizing people who criticize grammar, I created a sort of recursive irony.
"NOBODY expects the Spanish Inquisition!!!"
Man, maybe I should get some work done today... |
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antwanp
Beyond FM, Beyond AM, XM Satellite Radio
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-Antwan L. |
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Grail Knight
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join:2003-05-31 | reply to tapeloop
Well if this darn snow would go away I could tend to my shrubbery! |
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wolfox
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Dunnellon, FL | With a herring? |
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