B52GUNR
 | It's good, but it needs a little work :).
First, the background is OK,but I would have shot it a bit more open to blur it more since it's not really fall colors (that would look really nice if it were).
Second, the shadow is a bit strong on her face, this is a good time to use a reflector or light fill flash to lighten up her face.
Finally, dead center doesn't work too well for this one (some portraits it does, some not so much, this is a not so much). I would have had her more to the right of the frame and try to get more of a rule of thirds composition OR fill the frame more with her and the lovely Weimaraner.
So, good effort all in all, just needs a bit of tweaking but hey, that's what learning is all about :).hey mods · » Monday January 15th, @11:41AM
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