ryzst
 | Breaking the picture into thirds and putting your center of focus at one of the edges is the oldest 'rule' in the book. Take it with a big pinch of salt though. And it's nice to have your subject facing into the open space. That said, the model's POV and the close crop on the right don't work for me. Turn her another 20-30 degrees CCW and leave a little more open on the right. That's my 2 cents anyway. hey mods · » Saturday November 19th, @09:03PM
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ZZZZZZZ
 | I actually like the crop,but my eye keeps coming back to the mess of hair on her shoulder.
The image would be better with her beautiful long hair,straight down. JMO :)hey mods · » Saturday November 19th, @09:43PM
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SueS
 | I like the pose and the lighting. The crop cuts the image in 1/2 and makes the photo off balance. I don't see anything interesting in the background that it is necessary to have so much of it visible. My opinions. Have you tried a portrait crop? hey mods · » Sunday November 20th, @12:44PM
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jaykaykay
 | I think that the white is lovely. That said, I am also not sure about the composition. I wonder about cropping part of the white on the left side of her to place her 2/3 onto the image. hey mods · » Sunday November 20th, @03:17PM
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kim
 | I agree with all of your comments. Thanks hey mods · » Friday March 2nd, @07:11PM
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