fractalman93
 | Where's the yellow shirt with the horizontal zig-zag across it? :^)
Fractalman93hey mods · » Wednesday May 10th, @08:05PM
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jaykaykay
 | Nice shot. I like the B&W tones but that it's not really with a lot of contrast. It looks nice and soft. Soft, not as in focus but feeling. hey mods · » Wednesday May 10th, @08:07PM
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inciter
 | I liked the first one in color... Your Son??? I think he made the shot when you were both together. IMO the pose worked as a two some... hey mods · » Wednesday May 10th, @09:19PM
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Pateo
 | Again, good eye contact with the camera. I enjoy the crop that you've given this and think it makes it a much more intimate photograph, giving this a more emotive connection with the viewer. The black and white works well, though the color v was nice also. A bit of tweaking with curves might give this more punch, contrast-wise.
Hindsight being 20/20, it's easy to point things out that we might have overlooked and could be improved on. However I think you're heading in a good direction with your venture into portrait photography. Well done.
-Pathey mods · » Wednesday May 10th, @11:17PM
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LaurieE
 | When I look at a portrait the first thing I do is look at the eyes and the expression on the face...to me that is more important as a view than the techie stuff. When I look at this gentleman I see some hard work and a soft side that he keeps to himself. I think its great! hey mods · » Thursday June 15th, @03:30PM
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Charliebrown5
 | I like the gentleman bit, cheers for the comments. hey mods · » Saturday June 17th, @01:31AM
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